I'm curious...

[nightrythm]

What did you guys think of my poetry? I really do accept constructive criticism. Hell, I'll even accept that you don't like free verse and prefer to read a good sonnet. Just, um, yeah.... a little feedback?

Comments

[deliriumx.livejournal.com]

I really liked the imagry of the dragon wary of a winter alone.. it really painted a picture of the desolation.

The shorter ones conveyed a lot of feeling in few lines.

They were kinda downers probably from my own relation to those kinds of feelings, but as you said from a different lifetime. I'm glad we're both much happier now :)

[nightrythm]

And how!